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But I want to try write a diary.It will be a lot of mistake.A lot of wrong word , or anything. Even if that`s full of mistake , but it`s turly my mood.
I`m just want to say that i don`t know why i always make mistake.I don`t know what`s going on.
I always wait.I really want do something, anything.But I don`t know what I should do.I`m alway confuse.
I want keep going.But I`m afraid.Can you understand?
What`s in your mind?I can`t understand.I can saw appearance but cannot know what inside.
I think I really stubit.I can`t ......
I can`t explain what i mean.I can`t explain that not just because my English very bad . I think i can`t explain that even i use Chinese.
I want be a fool , not about intelligence quotient , I mean about my mood.
I`m a fool.But I`m not a fool.I don`t want think anymore .I don`t want consider anymore .I just want do , do , do. Don`t stop . Don`t be afraid . Nothing to scared .
But I can`t take the broken result.That`s why I retreat.
God know i don`t.
I really feel very happy at recent , about everyday ,every friends ,every mood , sadly, happily. I love you so , I need you so , I think I`m really lucky to know you.I expect every tomorrow.Because of you.
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1樓搶頭香
, ㄝ...不知道聯考有沒有要考作文
..........不過你真的錯的給她很離譜.........
以我一個大學英文均標 然後五年沒碰英文˙的人來看(好吧其實我英文不太好)
有些很基本的錯誤 如果你考試有要考作文的話
1 復數要加S
2 不要拼錯字
3連標點符號也錯了= =
至於文法還有其他的部分 ........
好像也有錯..........
我只記得我高中老師跟我講的
能多一分是一分吧
你別因為小錯誤扣光光
candygirll 於 June 23, 2006 12:34 PM 回應 |
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2樓頸推
哈哈,我這半年來一直在努力補英文的洞呢,不瞞妳說,其實這篇文章已經進步很多了,我大一時和朋友開玩笑說,我覺得我的日文比英文好,這倒有一半是真話,不是我日文多好,而是我英文太差了。
soces 於 June 23, 2006 03:29 PM 回應 |
I`m just want to say that i don`t know why i always make mistake.I don`t know what`s going on.
I always wait.I really want do something, anything.But I don`t know what I should do.I`m alway confuse.
I want keep going.But I`m afraid.Can you understand?
What`s in your mind?I can`t understand.I can saw appearance but cannot know what inside.
I think I really stubit.I can`t ......
I can`t explain what i mean.I can`t explain that not just because my English very bad . I think i can`t explain that even i use Chinese.
I want be a fool , not about intelligence quotient , I mean about my mood.
I`m a fool.But I`m not a fool.I don`t want think anymore .I don`t want consider anymore .I just want do , do , do. Don`t stop . Don`t be afraid . Nothing to scared .
But I can`t take the broken result.That`s why I retreat.
God know i don`t.
I really feel very happy at recent , about everyday ,every friends ,every mood , sadly, happily. I love you so , I need you so , I think I`m really lucky to know you.I expect every tomorrow.Because of you.
1樓
1樓搶頭香
, ㄝ...不知道聯考有沒有要考作文
..........不過你真的錯的給她很離譜.........
以我一個大學英文均標 然後五年沒碰英文˙的人來看(好吧其實我英文不太好)
有些很基本的錯誤 如果你考試有要考作文的話
1 復數要加S
2 不要拼錯字
3連標點符號也錯了= =
至於文法還有其他的部分 ........
好像也有錯..........
我只記得我高中老師跟我講的
能多一分是一分吧
你別因為小錯誤扣光光
candygirll 於 June 23, 2006 12:34 PM 回應 |
2樓
2樓頸推
哈哈,我這半年來一直在努力補英文的洞呢,不瞞妳說,其實這篇文章已經進步很多了,我大一時和朋友開玩笑說,我覺得我的日文比英文好,這倒有一半是真話,不是我日文多好,而是我英文太差了。
soces 於 June 23, 2006 03:29 PM 回應 |
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